Making a few changes to the Ahsoka Series: Is this what it should've been?

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  @Davidpz7ew · 2 years ago

  I’ve said it before, and I thought it before… The passion that you have for Star Wars is clearly visible, and that passion is what allows you to make videos like this. Every story or reworked story I have heard you  say it’s a literally 100 times better than anything that Lucas film is doing right now. A person like you with the passion you have is clearly what is a lacking at Lucasfilm… to come up with fantastic stories it really has to be someone with equal amounts of imagination, law knowledge of the franchise and generally, a huge love for Star Wars. If there is anyone at Lucasfilm with half a brain, they would literally employ you immediately! And they better do it soon before they literally flush Star Wars down the toilet because that is what is happening with every new show and movie they are making with the exception of Andor. Carry on your fantastic content we can at least dream that one day someone at Lucasfilm will aspire to be as fantastic as you.

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• BA

  @battlefrontbros2739 · 2 years ago

  Please continue this story. It is 1000th more intriguing than the original show

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• MR

  @mrcat3493 · 2 years ago

  Filoni needed the help of a script-doctor , someone that could have told him “no” or to change this or that.

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• MA

  @Malt0d3xtr1n · 2 years ago

  Hey, Thor! I'm actually working on a series of videos doing exactly what you did here, a sort of "rewrite" of the Ahsoka series! Your desire to do more creatively inspired me to try my own hand at creating! Loved this video and thank you for your work!

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• SU

  @SuicV · 2 years ago (edited)

  Already by the first scene, this feels much more intriguing than the actual show ever was

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• CH

  @Cheesehead_Caleb · 2 years ago

  Dude... This is SOOO much better already. Disney needs to HIRE you.

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  @I_am_a_Cabbage · 2 years ago

  Your &quot;what shouldve been&quot; is structured infinitely better than what we got. Great character setup, clear motivations and actual interactions with some depth.<br><br>I can still remember holding out hope that the flaws which I had seen throughout the season would be resolved or iron&apos;d out - that itd all come good. <br><br>Then the penultimate episode came along and confirmed for me the lack of depth it would continue to have... at this point, I am not sure if a second season / eventual film can turn things around. Maybe but imo the odds are against it.

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• ZA

  @zachary_fett · 2 years ago

  Hey Thor, I enjoy this “opening episode”. &nbsp;It sums up what happened before and sets the stage for the rest of the series nicely. &nbsp;I’ve long said that the first three episodes could have been an email, or an opening crawl, and that those episodes set up the rest of the series for failure, and you’ve condensed everything important from those episodes into your version. &nbsp;So yes, I’m here for the rest of them.

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• JA

  @jameskirk4692 · 2 years ago

  Wow! Thank you million times for this superb 15 mins of storytime enjoyment! Congratulations on being so creative and great writer, storyteller and content maker! Please continue!!!<br><br>I don&apos;t want to sound like I am overestimating how much I enjoy your stories and think they are far better ones that what Disney/Lucas film are putting out.<br>But I gotta be honest and tell you that this Ahsoka story of yours for episode one was truly immeasurably more entertaining and logical and intelligent, than the actual whole season from Filoni.<br><br>This is how I want official stories from star wars shows and movies to be and sound like. I love how you focused on connecting it directly to the events from Rebels and how you used scenes between characters to mention crucial information explaining both future scene that will come as well as previous scenes and even long past events. <br>Just as Filoni should have done but left everything confusing and disjointed/disconnected. I love the way you join all individual parts of the story into cohesive connected whole overall story, which therefore is so much more logical and easier and more rewarding to follow. Everything in your stories happens for a reason, and makes sense for characters to be in those specific emotional and physical states of their body, mind and relationships with other characters.<br><br>I could literally write a very very long comments of explanation why I love this and all other previous stories you tried telling on this channel, but comment section is not a good place for that.<br><br>Which leads me to finish with a question: what happened with those other previous story ideas you had and started telling us on this channel? And more specifically, am wondering about that Kenobi series story that you started rewriting with your ideas just like this Ahsoka series now. Have I missed the followup episodes somehow somewhere, or did you not ever continue recording it further than those first episodes?<br>I really looked forward to continuation of your Kenobi story, and your other stories.

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• JO

  @joshuamininger7745 · 2 years ago

  Dude, this video was immensely interesting and I would wait on more episodes with as much or more interest as waiting on the show! The thing is, THIS is the writing that these shows lack! I am impressed with your skill and saddened how it literally shines a light on the huge LACK of good writing in the show. Make sense? I just shake my head because I like your video so much, and just disbelieve that they can not find a decent writer ?? You deserve the role more than those who have it, my friend

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• EL

  @Elemento0420 · 2 years ago

  I had my own ideas to tweak this series. While I did enjoy it, I know it could&apos;ve been better. It&apos;s not complete, but my ideas are:<br><br>1. Starting the series with Ahsoka on Malechor for years and she only got home when Luke Skywalker, who is working on his jedi order, came to Malechor to better understand why the dark side is so tempting and how to resist it. This would be Ahsoka and Luke&apos;s first meeting.<br><br>2. Instead of nightsisters, the creators of the map were worshippers of the Mortis Gods, and one of the purgils&apos; migration points was at the shrine to the Daughter, which is why Ahsoka went there.<br><br>3. The reason Thrawn isn&apos;t after Ezra when we reach Paridea is because shortly after they arrived, they discovered a terrifying power on the planet threatening to get out. Ezra was the only one at the time that could contain it temporarily, so he and Thrawn made a truce that Ezra wouldn&apos;t attack Thrawn or his forces or attempt to hinder his efforts to escape, in exchange for Thrawn leaving Ezra in peace.<br><br>4. Ahsoka and Sabine&apos;s partnership starts onscreen instead of implying a fallout. Since Sabine is making their mission personal, Ahsoka decided to give Sabine training in lightsaber combat. Also, Sabine wouldn&apos;t use the force. Sabine can still be considered Ahsoka&apos;s student, but not in the force as I don&apos;t think that was necessary. <br><br>5. Ahsoka would still get a vision scene with Anakin so see can get closure. Though, I would set it up early in the series that Ahsoka won&apos;t help Luke with the new jedi order and was hesitatant to train Sabine. The reason that would be made clear in her last lesson with Anakin is that she fears that she would only be continuing Vader&apos;s legacy since her experience as a jedi was war. By the end of the lesson, Ahsoka understands that she can avoid the exact same path as Anakin, and she can be more than a soldier. By the end on the season(series?), Ahsoka would finally agree to help Luke with the new jedi order.<br><br>6. Despite Thrawn successfully returning to the galaxy, Ahsoka and Sabine return with Ezra joining them. The reunion at the end would have not just Hera and Chopper, but also Zeb, Rex(assuming he&apos;s still alive), Kallus, and Jacen(Ezra meeting his master&apos;s son would set up the idea that he will take Jacen as his apprentice).

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• MA

  @maalikhunter7365 · 2 years ago

  I now understand the pathetic urge people have when they message... First.

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