“I’m Calling Off Our Wedding,” She Whispered—Three Days Later, She Became His Father’s Wife

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• DI

  @dianevessels2632 · 1 month ago

  You repeated her checking into the hotel using cash from her emergency cash twice.  That doesn’t make sense.

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• SH

  @sharmnikumar510 · 4 weeks ago

  Why is the earlier part repeating?

• JE

  @jeangalvin · 1 month ago

  Listening from Rotorua New Zealand

• CD

  @cdo4Jesus · 6 days ago

  Did I miss the part where Elana became Derek's stepmom, or is the title partially wrong?

• KA

  @kathyromero3564 · 1 month ago (edited)

  N California,  USA. This was an Oh My Goodness Story. Intense game if chess. Thank you for writing this.

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• MA

  @MaryRoss1972 · 1 month ago

  Hop Bottom Pennsylvania USA

• CH

  @cherylscott73 · 1 month ago

  There are pieces of story line that don't make sense, never said Derek's parents were divorced, leaving the key, come on your safety depends on it. A few days before the wedding she's looking at wedding venues. Goes to a lawyer, not enough evidence,  has not talked to his father. cancel the wedding, meet with Markus, starts talking with ,Derek knows, she has not told Markus anything. But Markus knew some of what Derek was doing. Then not good evidence, then Derek has so much false evidence on them both. AI has tried to build drama on disconnected pieces of not realistic human actions and behaviors. At the start no information on just how rich and powerful the family and Derek were.

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• GO

  @goldeneagle8834 · 1 month ago

  Western Kansas

• LO

  @Lou1210-L · 1 month ago

  Why would her first comment to Marcus be 'Derek knows'? It doesn't make sense.

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• DE

  @deniseleach8611 · 1 month ago

  Libby Montana USA

• SI

  @silverdragonian3312 · 1 month ago

  why is this story reiterating?  is there nothing else?

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