Reviewing Your Original Songs Live with Top Music Publishers!

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• DA

  @dalehawkins7187 · 1 year ago

  I just found you guys a few days ago and I've been bingeing. These writer reviews are awesome. They give you an idea of what is out there, and they are both encouraging and terrifying. There are a lot of really good writers out there!

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• RO

  @Rohme.33 · 2 years ago (edited)

  Jenny was wonderful with her critiques. I hope you have her back!

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• WA

  @wadejackson7545 · 2 years ago

  Great show!  Love the insights.  'Drinking Games' was the standout for me.

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• TE

  @teej0813 · 1 year ago

  New songwriter here, and this was an incredibly helpful video. Been following SongTown for a month or so, and this is the first review session I've watched. Very informative. Thank you all!

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• JE

  @jennatracet7156 · 7 months ago (edited)

  They really missed the full sentiment of Young Hearts (<a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TOVrAFERXAI&amp;t=2468">41:08</a>). It&apos;s not a dad to daughter song, it&apos;s a parent to child song. It&apos;s really special lyrically, and I love the different take in each verse/pre-chorus/chorus. That said, pitching a song that needs a full play is tough in this forum. I&apos;d love to hear the full song. Great melodies/harmonies, and the lyrical rhythms are well done. I didn&apos;t like that the first young heart in v1 had the same two notes as the end of the first three lines of v1. What a beautiful song!

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• SO

  @SoraiaLMotta · 2 years ago

  Thank you for sharing your expertise.

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• DA

  @darrylweller6143 · 2 years ago

  Torrential Rain ❤

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• BE

  @beatfrombrain · 1 year ago

  The chorus of &quot;Blue Collar&quot; sounds like a rework of the chorus of &quot;Ain&apos;t No Rest for the Wicked&quot; by Cage The Elephant (2008).

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• M_

  @M_Dematty_Composer · 8 months ago

  Torrential Rain, i don’t agree that it feels dated, but the end of the first verse feels a bit brutal, gave me all your pain and there’s a price to pay, ouch. Just needs less brutality i think. I love the metaphor of a loved one’s problems feeling like a storm.

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• DA

  @daveandthebox8119 · 1 year ago

  Thank you from Lodi, California 🤙🏼

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• JU

  @judegraham463 · 2 years ago

  My thoughts on the song &apos;Work&apos;. I think a lot more people than Jenny might imagine can relate to the sentiment of this lyric. Really I think its quiet profound commenting beyond the importance of a marriage and what is needed to maintain it, namely attention, but also to the wider thoughts around &apos;work&apos; and who is really gaining, benefiting from the time we are being committed into work. thats all OK if you are getting more satisfaction than misery from your work, but if you&apos;re working in a Factory Line or even a professional job such as a Solicitor whose task it is to be confrontational and mean and deceitful (no malice intended but just an example), then you may well find the 60-80 hours you&apos;re expected to work for the firm every week is just a bit much. So I think more people from a much wider socio-economic demographic than you at first imagine could relate to such a song.

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• CL

  @claresteffen6424 · 2 years ago

  Very valuable and thanks for bringing in these publishers