WE'RE MAKING A MANGA

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  @SpilledInkyt · 1 year ago (edited) · pinned

  Learn more OR enter the Wordless World Manga Contest here!: <a href="https://bit.ly/3YoLtkN">https://bit.ly/3YoLtkN</a><br>FAQ page: <a href="https://x.com/KADOKAWAdigipub/status/1866081205290205245">https://x.com/KADOKAWAdigipub/status/1866081205290205245</a><br>(P.S. sorry for how hard it is to see Emily&apos;s draft...the pencil lines ended up lighter than expected. Itll be much more visible after inking LOL)

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  @greencoloredstar · 1 year ago (edited)

  Daidus! To indicate he&apos;s broke, have him turn out his empty pockets.<br><br>Also, you can use speech bubbles but use images inside. For example Emily, when the lady tells the witch there&apos;s a monster, you can add a speech bubble with a generic monster face inside!

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  @Pimpgamer101 · 1 year ago

  Man, just watching you explain your stories to the editor was hard to watch. Not cringe or anything, I feel the intensity of bringing your story to a professional publishing editor. That takes a lot of balls.

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  @christinaw9472 · 1 year ago

  Another suggestion for Emily. If you do want to keep the monster invisible, you can draw it with dotted lines to show transparency and have the characters looking everywhere except where it is. Then once it&apos;s visible, show it in high detail to show the contrast

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  @lilfellar · 1 year ago

  To show that the two are roommates in daidus&apos;s comic, daidus should&apos;ve just unlocked the door instead of ringing the door bell to indicate that he has access and lives there

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  @MrPonytron · 1 year ago (edited)

  Getting praise about your artwork from a manga editor has to be the greatest feeling ever. I&apos;m so jealous

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  @Metawraith · 1 year ago

  Daidus, counter suggestion. &nbsp;Keep the ending as is, BUT add a beginning to show yourself leaving that same home, introducing Fat Guy and Sen as characters waving goodbye as panel 1 or 2.

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  @khaliunbuyandelger2957 · 1 year ago (edited)

  <a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGUDOc-EvGI&amp;t=2034">33:54</a> I like how polite the editor is. She is giving really good constructive criticism but makes sure to praise them for their work too. And it’s kinda nice how she wanted to correct herself for giving advice on the two page spread part for emily but realized she might have already thought about it when she brought out her first draft.

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  @play_history · 1 year ago

  I am not an artist, but as someone who wants to do fiction writing the conversation with the editor was FASCINATING. Rarely do you get to hear about how literary editors look at stories and I was awed by her immediate identification of things that weren&apos;t clear. As hard as it is to hear that a story isn&apos;t as punchy as you thought inside your head, this was amazing to experience.

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  @arihantmohanthind1547 · 1 year ago (edited)

  Jesus I didn&apos;t know you were actually gonna give the Manga to the editor in real life. I thought the rest of the video would be inking, that jump scared me a bit

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  @Lawn_Clippings29 · 1 year ago (edited)

  For Daidus&apos; manga, having the roomates with Daidus at the start and having him get seperated after getting his hat stolen, only for him to get back with them instead of back home might better show that they already know eachother and are friends.<br>EDIT: Also, Daidus and Fat Guy dap up

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  @DeadlandsCartoon · 1 year ago

  I would love to see Daidus&apos;s Manga as a full on series. Very Slice of life action with so much chaos through a fun world. I do like the first shot with seeing the squid floating through the air. If I could change one thing Id have a small panel showing your face showing that he relates to them, content mood face I suppose, just to convey a foreshadow of him using squid powers.<br><br>It&apos;s just a really fun set up!<br><br>Emily&apos;s is just that chaotic cute fun. I love the comedy especially how clumsy our heroine is. I wanna see this fully realized and know it&apos;ll have that signature clean look of yours! <br><br>ALSO THAT SPIDER IS SO DAMN CUTE!

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